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Just gonna leave some notes in no order or organization of my thoughts on what could be improved/what I liked:

What I liked:

- Menu screen looked great

- Small rooms were great, there didn't feel like any wasted space

- Music fire

- Mugshots looked amazing

- Story was well done 

- Sound effects were great especially for the text boxes

- Alex character was very funny, overall dialogue was solid

Potential Improvements

- Start cutscene too fast (maybe im just a slow reader idk)

- Boulder puzzle was a bit too much, it's a small thing but I think it'd have made more sense to have the boulder closer to the hole

- I really liked the mugshot expressions, would have liked to see more of that (like the blinking/closed eyes while they were talking) (I didn't really notice it till the last cutscene)

- Battles felt a little bit too slow idk how to describe it, I also immediately forgot what is strong against what

Overall great concept, excited to see a full game

I suck at puzzle games so it's probably just me but I wasn't able to figure out some of the puzzles. Really cool concept story was also pretty good given the time constraints, was enjoyable. Default assets were a minus but also understandable. Pacing was eh, it was interesting but could have gone a little quicker, maybe having the ability to move faster would have been better. Overall was fun but I struggled to figure some things out. Would like to see aspects of this chat game incorporated in a full fledged game, cool idea!

First off I couldn't tell if the game was bugging out at some points with dialogue being the same twice in a row but it didn't bother me too much. The first battle felt just unwinnable enough to where it was cool, I wasn't just getting absolutely bodied. Very well executed. Story was good considering the length of the game, was simple and easy to follow, had a nice flow and conclusion. Default assets are meh but understandable. Combat was uninteresting at first but sped up was actually pretty fun. With only a few battles I felt like there could have been less options for combat and it would have possibly been better but it wasn't too too much, just maybe a little too many abilities. Overall fun little game

The flow of the game was great I enjoyed getting abilities quickly but it also felt super generic and didn't have much personality. Overall was OK.